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[philly dudes]

In the Spirit of NG

I give you 3/5 Anuses and 7/10 Dicks.

Now enjoy them. -.0

Phillydude569 responds:

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[A Real Street Fighter]

As far as collab pieces go...

It was kinda long, but it got it's point across. It's kinda funny (it got a chuckle and a smirk out of me) and the ending was great.

Since you say you made this a while ago, I can only assume you've improved on your artstyle and animation quality since then. So, for you, an 8 out of 10 and a 5/5. :3 Enjoy

With Love and Pie,

Jak Reaver

martiescageda responds:

Well, in my latest movie, DIREMESIS 3, I was still drawing by mouse. But now that I have a wacom my style will be much better, just wait for it :)

[Mazimo - The Drill Master]

A good first attempt.

A modest 7 and a 5.

Now, for the reasoning and some advice.

The reason I've given you a 7 is because of the effort you put in. The five is for the smooth-ish animation. For a first timer, it's pretty damn good.

Now for the tips:

Work on fluidity of your animation. The more frames the better. It doesn't hurt to go overboard on frames. It creates a smoother and all around better quality animation.

Text Scrolling. The text scrolling needs to be sped up just a bit, as most people on NG do not have any form of patience.

Since this is your introduction of your character, make a story for him. Seriously, you have this great idea of a stick figure, elaborate. As a writer (currently trying to get two books published), I know it doesn't hurt to do a little background. But that is the key word, little.

Try not to go overboard with story when it comes to stick figures. The less that is needed to remember, the more your audience can enjoy the carnage and sheer awesomeness that is Stick Figures. Unless you are going to develop an entire story and this will be more than a series of gory stick fights. Then, by all means, develop away (within reason).

Lastly, I'd just like to say keep at it and you can do some really kickass things. You show a lot of potential and I look forward to viewing more of your work.

Mazimo responds:

hahaha thx for the awesome comment and the tips!!! im new to animation so any helping hand is more than welcome ^^ and another thing since your a writer i was wondering if you could give me some cool ideas to make a story or we could also work together. (i know im a noob soo the faster i learn the better and you sound like you know your stuff)

[Kris and Mike: Payback]

And the effort shows

I like the dynamic pictures and the epic flaming fist. It brings to mind all those times my friends and I used to drive by the "Miracle Mile", a mile long stretch of Volkswagen Beetles. No one came out of those trips unscathed.

So, for the nostalgia and general lawls, A 5/5 and a 10/10.

MichaelFay responds:

Thank ya guy!
Yeah we live in a big town now so they are all over the place I just never notice.

[Halo Reach: Armor Locked]

Wow...

It's a rare day when I find nothing to complain about in a flash.

Amazing, mate.

5's and 10's. You deserve them.

DoomzDayChikn responds:

all ur 5 R belong to me? :D thank youu

[Christmas - for school]

And this is what I think...

It seems you have more than the basic understanding of Flash. This is quite more than I have accomplished, as I leave the animation to my mates. I shall stick to writing and recording.

You promised and delivered flawlessly. Hasn't crashed or bugged out after at least 20 loops. Consider yourself Favourited and I look forward to seeing what you can really do with Flash.

A 5/5 and a 10/10.

Bjartr responds:

Thanks!

[Repercussions of Evil]

This is pure WIN.

It kind of reminds me of Half-Life: Full Life Consequences. Either way, this was fucking brilliant, mate.

Galneda responds:

Doom:RoE is often coupled with that story, and both are hilariously bad, but in my opinion, nothing can top the Gmod interpretation of HL:FLC.

Glad you like this!